I traced thin lines in a sea map
measuring
the distance between north and south
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Thanks so much Suman, for you too. You are so gentle, OH!
A commendable piece of ink! ..............................so beautifully penned.................loved it. Dear Poetess! Wishing you and your loved ones a happy Christmas!
Enchanting write. Lovely colored with blue ink blooms under twilight of moon sparkling through stars and reaches every loving guy. lovely piece. wooooooooooow.100 out of 10
Colored lines on cartographic ocean charts; They keep us apart; I dare rip up the maps Calling it a mishap Or some such breach of truth: This is a wonderful poem, forsooth!
distance feels in kilometers, oceans and seas make barricades mountains and valleys block your journey only in earth but in mind the same second.
really a eager of emotion flows through... geography in your heart.. breathtaking.. i hear the tin tin sound... Musfiq
I agree even though I speak English. And yes like a lover.
What a vision created here! I shall watch for the storm you stirred with your hand.
Your poem is exquisite in it's well communicated flair for taking us along the waves your soul surfed....beautiful! ! ! ! PEACE