Saturday, December 21, 2019

Love Of Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're there in the pond as like bloomed lotus
I's on the roof of two storey building
Saw you from far sight crossing paddy fields
Juvenile youth made mind embroidered path
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

fantabulous your imagination

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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

Beautiful loving poem; illusion that makes a life of dream and the dream where the untrue love lives well

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 December 2019

It seems u were once again in the GARDEN OF EDEN Flowers and butterflies all flying about in the rain shorn of clothes or tightened about the human frame any one would n such a garden of love go insane I wouldn't like to outside remain Take me to such a garden I wish to see before life is all sucked out of me and even ou don't see nor feel the love like on a canvas reel

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Kostas Lagos 22 December 2019

Exeptional poem Mahtab!

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