Friday, November 21, 2008

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Rating: 4.9

Quest of moon ruffles the ocean
Betides thrill reeling through waves
Images riffle by queries of ocean
Promise when holds truth by reality.
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Dr subhendu kar
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Obinna Eruchie 17 October 2009

A poem with beautiful imagery and nicely written.

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

very poetic and beautiful, well written and a good read thank you

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Lady Grace 09 June 2009

poetic words are sweet when it comes from a poetic lips..gtace

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Yana Djin 14 March 2009

really beautiful and effervescent

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Michaela Tatualla 08 January 2009

You are simply amazing! Great write...Keep it up!

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Jen Shearer 14 December 2008

This piece of writing is beautiful. Keep up the creative work

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Jenann Wingfield 14 December 2008

Thanks for the invite to read your amazing work! Enjoyed!

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Sallie Tompkins 13 December 2008

Thanks for the invite to read your phenomenal work. I do believe you are Edgar Allan Poe's brother(smile) . You are your own, and you are unique, rich, and authentic. Sallie

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Sarah Pajarillo 09 December 2008

wow! im really glad you messaged me to read this peice! i really love all the imagery! i like to just close my eyes after i read one of my pieces or one of someone else and just reread it in my head.....its really beautiful!

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Charles M Moore 09 December 2008

Having read this work I find it quite religious in it's tone (the eternal love of God) and the images of bleeding roses and bonding of all gods into one, Nice piece of work.

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Kassem Oude 05 December 2008

Really your writing is baffling, I was delightful by reading it.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 December 2008

Wonder write, But I Like these lines most: love eternal is mortal true by resilience never being burden of shadow crunching tears

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William Jackson 27 November 2008

I like the line 'Love excells by assimilation'

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Bonnie Collins 24 November 2008

The sturucture and the imagery are very excellent, but may I say, I had to read this twice, as I wasnt sure I was following the same path as you had written, it was very good none the less, and if that was your intent, then the poem is very good... Bonnie

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Ema Nekaf 24 November 2008

The imagery and structure is great! Great work! It kind of bothers me that you stopped capitilizing words halfway through it. But it's nothing I can't get over.

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Indira Babbellapati 24 November 2008

quite transcendental in tone...

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Ency Bearis 24 November 2008

an enchanting composition...deep introspective write....great poem.. Ency Bearis

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Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson

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Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson

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Viola Grey 23 November 2008

this is no mere 'scribblings'...it is a beautiful work of art...lovely poem Dr

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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