Quest of moon ruffles the ocean
Betides thrill reeling through waves
Images riffle by queries of ocean
Promise when holds truth by reality.
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very poetic and beautiful, well written and a good read thank you
This piece of writing is beautiful. Keep up the creative work
Thanks for the invite to read your amazing work! Enjoyed!
Thanks for the invite to read your phenomenal work. I do believe you are Edgar Allan Poe's brother(smile) . You are your own, and you are unique, rich, and authentic. Sallie
wow! im really glad you messaged me to read this peice! i really love all the imagery! i like to just close my eyes after i read one of my pieces or one of someone else and just reread it in my head.....its really beautiful!
Having read this work I find it quite religious in it's tone (the eternal love of God) and the images of bleeding roses and bonding of all gods into one, Nice piece of work.
Really your writing is baffling, I was delightful by reading it.
Wonder write, But I Like these lines most: love eternal is mortal true by resilience never being burden of shadow crunching tears
The sturucture and the imagery are very excellent, but may I say, I had to read this twice, as I wasnt sure I was following the same path as you had written, it was very good none the less, and if that was your intent, then the poem is very good... Bonnie
The imagery and structure is great! Great work! It kind of bothers me that you stopped capitilizing words halfway through it. But it's nothing I can't get over.
an enchanting composition...deep introspective write....great poem.. Ency Bearis
Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson
Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson
this is no mere 'scribblings'...it is a beautiful work of art...lovely poem Dr
A poem with beautiful imagery and nicely written.