Sunday, June 14, 2009

Love Of Bullets Comments

Rating: 5.0

the bullet said bang,
it hit me and rang,
it hit me square in the head,
i felt the darkness i knew i was dead
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Dementia DeSalvo 17 September 2009

ZZzzzing! Keep those creative bullets coming, and don't forget to clean your gun. :) Favorite'd.

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~ Jon London ~ 14 June 2009

Very deep expressive piece my lovely, you've painted a scene that most would come to know is the expression of (I Love You To Death) ....brilliant write...keep shooting them out...you've got a great talent

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 June 2009

Love ends with tragedy would always be the greatest love as one can't tolerate the other.Good writes Breanna! !

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