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I like this one it hits close to home for me might even say a little too close comes across as something that was hard to write

I agree with Mr Hosein here, although the theme has been tried and tested, once this poem has been read a few times it is clear that is holds deeper more personal issues...... nice write Michelle. best wishes vincent

A piece about a similar theme but approaching from a different angle - which makes it a refreshing and deeper read than its peers. A nice job and an original read. - K.