Love No More Poem by Matloob Bokhari

LOVE NO MORE
Matloob Bokhari

LOVE NO MORE
I met a lady in a boat of life, beautiful and light,
Her grace and company attracted me sweetly.
Her eyes lighted in me the lamp of love.
Showed me shethe infinite meadow of heaven.
Explained the river of milky way flowing in the sky.
Attentively, I listened what she said.
Friendship is the bond that cherishes truth.
My heart rejoiced with thrilling mirth.
Rapture of love was beyond description.
When the arc of love enveloped me completely,
My eyes were on her face, she, looking elsewhere;
I was talking to her, she thinking something else.
Suddenly, frailty changed her heart, no light, darkness
Tears, insanity, blindness, no path - love no more!

COMMENTS: LOVE NO MORE
Marvinbrato: xLove has to be reciprocated...or else it shall eventually dies! Thanks for sharing.
RAJ NANDY: xYour poetic lines reminded me of Shakespeare's Sonnets to his 'Dark Lady' and her loves frailty! Thanks, -Raj
LaSoaphiaQuXazs: xLook at this way: We meet people when we have to learn something from each other. Both person is teaching the other for something, let it be good or bad. When they cannot give anymore, that is the time to separate. I see this, that is why I found true happiness within myself. Wishing you the best.
Diane Louise Werbisky: So sad, so beautiful..
Fran Ayers: Beautiful words, with an ending that shows the frailty of love.
Mercedes WebbPullman: Bbeautiful thoughts, beautifully expressed.
Laura Grillo Laveglia: A very beautiful, heartfelt piece!
Michele Vizzotti-White: the first great line is so captivating. So sad, so beautiful.. Enchanting and fanciful. You are a great communicator, the best writers are such. better then some politicians who study public speaking
Karyn Walker: Oh you got me so excited then dropped me on my head! You`re so good at this my Brother! ! . You do that a lot I notice. Lyrical they are building up in a crescendo then falling, falling....a true gift and fantastic write! A bittersweet story told by one of the finest poets I know
RAJ NANDY: Your poetic lines reminded me of Shakespeare's Sonnets to his 'Dark Lady' and her loves frailty! Thanks, -Raj
Jacqueline Kunst: This is so beautiful, touching and loverble.,



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xLove has to be reciprocated...or else it shall eventually dies! Thanks for sharing.
19 Sep 2013 by marvinbrato | Reply
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xYour poetic lines reminded me of Shakespeare's Sonnets to his 'Dark Lady' and her loves frailty! Thanks, -Raj
19 Sep 2013 by RAJ NANDY | Reply
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xLook at this way: We meet people when we have to learn something from each other. Both person is teaching the other for something, let it be good or bad. When they cannot give anymore, that is the time to separate. I see this, that is why I found true happiness within myself. Wishing you the best.
22 Sep 2013 by LaSoaphia QuXazs