Love Never Ends Sans Soul, Sans Body, Sans Heart Comments

A poignant narrative of true love, it's depth and beauty reaching out and touching those who read it! An excellent poem, with flowing rhythm and rhyme adding to it's significance. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

But thank dieu their souls met Even after being separated apart Because love never ends sans soul, Sans body, sans heart…………………Lovely poem.

A great love story narrated with poetic greatness.................yash..........simply brilliant................

my willing suspension of the here and now made me watch it in the words! ! !

I really enjoy reading this poem. It is very good that I can't stop reading it. Great job. I really like how you write your poems. (:

I love the way your write your poems, with such meaning and depth, it just captures my soul and makes me want to read more.

A nice poem. A nice love story well narrated. 'storm too strong for human hand' - Loved this line. 'poem describes the nature of true love which is endless, fathomless............valueless.and continues forever -yash shinde (poet) ' - I agree with you, except that I do not think true love is 'valueless' as you have mentioned in your comment. Best wishes and happy writing!

the maiden held her lover's palm tight the sea to raised it's hand 'My life can go my soul can go but never will go your hand, , , what a beauful stanza, , , ,

I really felt the depth of your poem. Almost bought to tears by it. So wonderful expressions you give and delightful details. Ummmmmm! good to the last line. Excellent write.

Beautiful verses ..love beyond death ..

Beautiful verses ..love beyond death ..

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

Your narrative style has a specialty which I adore too much.This one is no exception.

Nice feeling, nice expression. Best wishes.

well-written, you have some talent! eloquent; dramatic; and great ending.

You get a rating of 10 for this poem! I love the story! It is tragic but us humans love tradgedy and romance!

very fantastic osummmmmm! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

very nice, wish i was that good at 14, and you`ll only get better as you live, love and dream

What a lovely poem of yours! You got an elegant of writing and you are only 14-year-old, yet you write very good! 10+++ score I enjoy this poem.well done, Yash! Alon Dy

Truly a lovely one :) very romantic and it reminds me of a story i once did in my 7th grade. N e way i like it. Keep it up.