I recently ran across a list Deborah and I created long ago
It contained the dreams for our perfect house...our ideal bungalow.
We called it our North Carolina Love Nest and it was to be our creed
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Oh! P of the D...years ago I see upon a closer look. I suspect you are no longer with PH as you have not responded to a few messages I've left over two years. ; (
(oops) ....my preference here at home, in SC, either. No biography? bri ;) I like the 2-line stanzas, the story, and the fine rhyming. ;) p.s. I didn't know this was a P of the D till I read Kim's comment. bri ;)
I gave 4 stars, but I'd like 'rest', not 'nest' for poem's last word. Ah, well, I don't always get
Liked the very phrae 'personal honeycomb' A magnificent poem!
Lovely poem. Dreams are build with love, we let go of them for love. Because to love and be loved is the greatest of the dream.
I think a lot of people will relate to this poem. Good poem.
We were young and innocent back then...and our dreams...unlimited and grand But despite our best intentions...life didn't go the way we planned.........What we could not do is left for our next generations.
You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed Because we realized...if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest.....very fine thought.
Very nice, Jim. A wonderful home is a plus, but loving relationships matter more. You express this in down-to-earth terms and personalize it well..
Good rendition of words in heartwarming romantic piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Jim.
Love that is truly defined in this well-penned piece! I liked this alot! :)
Lovely love in simple words...love this poem a lot...congratulations on being the poet of the day
You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed Because we realized...if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest. Love divine and love defined. Beautiful... Congratulation for the poem of the day. You made my day.......... God Bless
And you summed it all up nicely! Wonderful poem, deserving of poem of the day.
Congrats, all dreams may not come true, still there is a lot in life if there is love in a family.
But despite our best intentions...life didn't go the way we planned... no human EVER BORN has yet been born to plan you r no exception but ur happy that's a blessing O POET GRAND
Until one egg falls out upon the grass That break's it's fall.. iip.. James
With true love, one can be living on the streets and still be very happy. Beautiful testament to love! Jim, congratulations on a very well deserved Poem Of The Day. It brought a smile to my lips. And tears of joy for both of you.
I love this poem, and it's so true.