Friday, October 7, 2016

Love Nest Comments

Rating: 4.7

I recently ran across a list Deborah and I created long ago
It contained the dreams for our perfect house...our ideal bungalow.

We called it our North Carolina Love Nest and it was to be our creed
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Jim Yerman
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John Carter Brown 24 February 2024

I love this poem, and it's so true.

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M. Asim Nehal 20 June 2023

Excellent poem, great rhyming and perfect flow.

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

Oh! P of the D...years ago I see upon a closer look. I suspect you are no longer with PH as you have not responded to a few messages I've left over two years. ; (

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

(oops) ....my preference here at home, in SC, either. No biography? bri ;) I like the 2-line stanzas, the story, and the fine rhyming. ;) p.s. I didn't know this was a P of the D till I read Kim's comment. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

I gave 4 stars, but I'd like 'rest', not 'nest' for poem's last word. Ah, well, I don't always get

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 August 2021

Liked the very phrae 'personal honeycomb' A magnificent poem!

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Savita Tyagi 27 March 2021

Lovely poem. Dreams are build with love, we let go of them for love. Because to love and be loved is the greatest of the dream.

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Pamela lutwyche 02 September 2020

I think a lot of people will relate to this poem. Good poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2019

We were young and innocent back then...and our dreams...unlimited and grand But despite our best intentions...life didn't go the way we planned.........What we could not do is left for our next generations.

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Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed Because we realized...if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest.....very fine thought.

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John Beaton 15 September 2018

Very nice, Jim. A wonderful home is a plus, but loving relationships matter more. You express this in down-to-earth terms and personalize it well..

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Chinedu Dike 20 May 2018

Good rendition of words in heartwarming romantic piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Jim.

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Aqua Flower 10 May 2018

Love that is truly defined in this well-penned piece! I liked this alot! :)

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Indira Renganathan 10 October 2017

Lovely love in simple words...love this poem a lot...congratulations on being the poet of the day

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Khirod Dalpati 09 October 2017

You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed Because we realized...if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest. Love divine and love defined. Beautiful... Congratulation for the poem of the day. You made my day.......... God Bless

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Practicing Poetess 09 October 2017

And you summed it all up nicely! Wonderful poem, deserving of poem of the day.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2017

Congrats, all dreams may not come true, still there is a lot in life if there is love in a family.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2017

But despite our best intentions...life didn't go the way we planned... no human EVER BORN has yet been born to plan you r no exception but ur happy that's a blessing O POET GRAND

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James Mclain 09 October 2017

Until one egg falls out upon the grass That break's it's fall.. iip.. James

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Richard Wlodarski 09 October 2017

With true love, one can be living on the streets and still be very happy. Beautiful testament to love! Jim, congratulations on a very well deserved Poem Of The Day. It brought a smile to my lips. And tears of joy for both of you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2017

Lovely absolute theory You all are great poets of salt

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