Love Negotiation Poem by Jacqueline Louw

Love Negotiation

Rating: 4.5


Trapped in this circle of events
trying to get out, but im afraid to take the risks

He has a power over me
something i cant explain you see

So many times i wanted to let go
but somehow i cant coz my world will fall apart
it will be an ending not a brand new start

You talk about me clinging to habits and security
somehow i wish i could make you see

Were will i end up? that i cant tell
will i ever have the guts to break his spell

I want to say im sorry for not listening
opening my eyes and see whats happening

But all i really needed was some inspiration
not just another love negotiation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
1khmerking Kampuchea 20 October 2008

Wonderful poem! Like always, I enjoy reading your poem. You're right we don't need no negotiation, like the old saying, 'action speak louder than word'. So we must act and not stand still. Great poem, like always enjoy reading your poem, thank you! I give this a 10! ! !

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