Love - My Only One - Sweet! Comments

I felt every word of this and I was able to do so because there were no distractions in what the writer had to say. There were no poetic tricks foisted on the reader. Its really a prose piece and for a poem, it may be too long. But the purpose of this writing was not to suit a critic. It was to say I love you. And as everyone knows; when you're in love, you want to say it every way you can. GW62