Saturday, July 14, 2012

Love: My Fate (Radha-25) Comments

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My fate is not in my hand now
Handful of solitude falls off my hand
Even if the dead banyan tree
Laughs at me
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Subrat Pradhan
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Robin Bennett 03 August 2012

This piece is so wonderful! There is so much going on, I love the depth of this piece. You have managed to tell a story in a grand way and turn it into a lovely piece of poetry. It has many layers and I love peeling away each one. Great job!

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