Friday, April 30, 2010

Love More Than Love Could Recall (Double Ballade With 8 Line Stanza) Comments

Rating: 4.8

The sound says love is not a crush;
As one we moved from plain to dote.
The love became more than a blush.
You are my boo, that is my vote.
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Leslie Alexis
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Robert Melliard 26 August 2011

Hello. Sorry I took so long to read your message and your poem. Better late than never. If you like rhyme, you might like a poem of mine called Compendium.

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Vinod Kumar 30 July 2011

Beautiful lines you put all the essential extracts and essences for the situation nice job for the nice times preparation, and the sweet senic beauty also it is mind blowing performance go ahead with the wonderful love and the beauty of nature,10+

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Abdallah Gamal 30 July 2011

A so true and amazing love poem, , I love it, , it takes the one who read it to a very wonderful place not anyone can reach it, , The most stanza I loved is Our hills are big and very lush, They’re full of plums and then a cote, That keeps safe mistletoe's thrush A bird that sings the lovers' note; There even lies a pretty goat! To give, I have the wherewithal, On my word, I do not misquote, A love more than love could recall. it talks very well and right, , nice poem as usual, , rated 10 :)

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Rouge Stallion 30 July 2011

I think it is truly lovely. very well made. All i can say is it must have taken a while. keep up the good work.

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