Wednesday, November 8, 2017

Love (Mohabath) .. Translated By Akhtar Jawad Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is restless, I'm in love with you
Joint beats are endless, I'm in love with you
You filled my life with a joy I never had
Reflected in your naughtiness, I'm in love with you
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Rini Shibu
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

I love to be crazy in your love, sweetheart, In your arms a recess, I'm in love with you/// beautiful translation

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Akhtar Bhai, Wonderfully translated. Great. At par with the original..

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks for Akhtarji for translating Rini

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Savita Tyagi 30 December 2017

Akhtar Jim is master of love poems. I will look up for your Hindi one too.

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Rini Shibu 30 December 2017

You are right he is good in love poems.. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2017

Endless Love! ! I'm in love with you! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 30 December 2017

Thanks Edward for your comment.. Happy new year Rini

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 08 November 2017

Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thank you so much Soumya for reading and commenting

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Lamar Cole 08 November 2017

I am happy for the translation so that I am able to enjoy this great poem.

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

:) Lam, nice to hear that you liked it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 November 2017

Rini it's a lovely poem..I read the Hindi version of this poem...Unfortunately my remarks bounced back..Any way, this is a beautiful translation. You filled my life with a joy I never had/ Reflected in your naughtiness-Appreciated..10

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thanks Dillip for reading both poems.. Rini

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Nosheen Irfan 08 November 2017

Lovely poem n an equally lovely translation. Credit to both of you.

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thanks Nosheen for the comment Rini

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