You have plans for it or not
but it comes your way
you have desires for it or not
but it comes your way
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Well done.Nicely you've presented your feelings expressions.Beautifulflow write.Indeed it's a good piece of work.
Splendid choice of scheme and literary devices.. The meaning you wanted to convey has come out beautifully! ! keep up the good work..10++
Gorgeous poem. Love makes the world go around and it is sung and spoken about every second of every single day around the world. Your poem had a lovely flow to it and I thoroughly enjoyed it. 10 Karin Anderson
Love, that beautiful, uplifting often painful emotion that so many poets try to portray so many different ways......this, another interesting way of talking about love which never fails to get attention as we all crave those three little words: I love you Works for me every time Ruth: -)
That is definitely what Love means......... Interesting piece.
This is really good! I appreciate your comments on my poems as well. Thank You [=
This is a great definition of Love so well presented from the day of birth till the change as get married. Nice write
well written in a very beautiful way you have described about love and its been conveyed very clearly...10+++