Sunday, February 19, 2012

Love Me Without Pity Comments

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We 've been together,
Thinking it would last forever.
One little fight, we scatter.
But, couldn't live without her-
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Michael Hopkins 13 August 2022

Where there is pity, there can be no love or at least a weal flow. Well penned, emotional poem

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

wonderful deep amd insightful.......great feelings powerful expresssions....................lovely :)

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Apeksha Kumar 13 March 2012

waaoo.. i could really feel the words.. huh.. awsome! :)

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Ramesh Rai 20 February 2012

love with pity has no relevance

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Rose Jones 19 February 2012

wow. Good poem. how old are you? you write well.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 February 2012

Without love, no one feel pity, so it is love disguised. Do not miss the chance. Nice poem..

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