Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, May 30, 2019

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Rating: 5.0

The woman's cancer had got worse;
She'd given all that she could give,
Her doctor said that very day:
"You have just eight more hours to live."
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Aniruddha Pathak 16 June 2019

A perfect hangman's gallows humour

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Kim Barney 28 May 2022

Thank you, Aniruddha.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2019

Well executed poem. Humorous one. Interesting to read. Nice penmanship. Thsnks for sharing. Full vote.10

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Kim Barney 28 May 2022

Kumarmani, my friend, thank you! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond. I don't spend as much time on the web as I used to, and I have hundreds of comments to which I should respond..

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Maryellen Smith 02 June 2019

You have a morbid sense of humor, but this is incredibly funny! What a fantastic punch line!

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Kim Barney 08 June 2019

Thanks, Maryellen. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Tom Billsborough 01 June 2019

Brilliant last line. Great poem. " And neither do you, " she no doubt replied as she thumped him with a rolling pin.

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Kim Barney 02 June 2019

Thanks, Tom. Glad you liked it. I don't think Gajanan understood.

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Gajanan Mishra 31 May 2019

Love all, easy to say, good write

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Kim Barney 02 June 2019

Thanks for the comment, Gajanan.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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