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Ok. So i have NO (underlined) idea why you are so hard on yourself! You are 12 right? is that what I read? I will tell you, when I was twelve, I was still picking my nose. Haha. Not really, but you get the point. I think this poem is really interesting because it can relate to so many people. Your ideas are very mature for a person your age, for which I applaud you. - Just as a note of criticism, as it is in my nature (sorry) , in the future, when you get inspired by something, like a picture or a flower or an idea of any kind, you should think about a double layer. I dont know if they taught you that in English, i know im in 11th grade, and they just taught me that last year. But a peice is so much more interesting if there is a deeper meaning. Like my poem 'Stream of what? ' on the surface, i am describing any ordinary stream... but underneath, I am describing a feeling. I leave it up to the reader to decide which one. Just a thought to enrich your work as a young poet. :) ps. I have a huge chemistry test tomorrow, but i took the time to look at a few of your poems. Thats how good they are. So keep doing what your doing because its working :)

Whenever I listen to sad songs I need a hug...beautiful poem.