Come to a beach on a sunny cold day,
It's a bright Sunday, a hot bold day,
And see my moving and flowing art,
I'm dancing everywhere for you sweetheart,
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So beautifully crafted and so wonderfully written. A poem that can only be woven and delivered by a brilliant mind. Very encompassing write that expresses in beautiful detail the importance of water in an enchanting verses. Another poetic gem. A diamond that sparkles forever. It should be Poem Of the Day.
EXCELLENT! How did I miss this marvelous and one of a kind poem. One of the best poems I have ever read with a theme on water. Absolutely true! ! ! We all love water. It is an integral part of life. Without it we don't have life.
Amazing poem.....loved it....Beautifully written.....thank you for sharing :)
Awesome....Great metaphor and nice poem with romantic touch......100+
grrtt penned sirji....... tera aina hun.... tu hansti hai to hansta hun... to roti hai to rota hun...... tu mujhey dhundhey ya mai tujhey dhundey kaisey mumkin........ tu mujhmey hai, mein tujhmey hun........
Ohhhhh wooooowwww wooooww woowwww soo romantic sweet and simple. Babajaan you made my day with this beautiful heart tickling poem. Just loved the love so beautifully portrayed in this poem.10
So happy that Poem Hunter just delivered this poem right before my very eyes when advertisements just shuffle poems here and there Onto my Poem List. Beautiful....Beautiful..... Loved reading it.