Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Love Me I Am Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come to a beach on a sunny cold day,
It's a bright Sunday, a hot bold day,
And see my moving and flowing art,
I'm dancing everywhere for you sweetheart,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

So happy that Poem Hunter just delivered this poem right before my very eyes when advertisements just shuffle poems here and there Onto my Poem List. Beautiful....Beautiful..... Loved reading it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

So beautifully crafted and so wonderfully written. A poem that can only be woven and delivered by a brilliant mind. Very encompassing write that expresses in beautiful detail the importance of water in an enchanting verses. Another poetic gem. A diamond that sparkles forever. It should be Poem Of the Day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

EXCELLENT! How did I miss this marvelous and one of a kind poem. One of the best poems I have ever read with a theme on water. Absolutely true! ! ! We all love water. It is an integral part of life. Without it we don't have life.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 February 2016

Amazing poem.....loved it....Beautifully written.....thank you for sharing :)

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M Asim Nehal 17 February 2016

Awesome....Great metaphor and nice poem with romantic touch......100+

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Kelly Kurt 17 February 2016

We are mostly water, the source of life.

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Mithilesh Yadav 17 February 2016

grrtt penned sirji....... tera aina hun.... tu hansti hai to hansta hun... to roti hai to rota hun...... tu mujhey dhundhey ya mai tujhey dhundey kaisey mumkin........ tu mujhmey hai, mein tujhmey hun........

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 February 2016

Ohhhhh wooooowwww wooooww woowwww soo romantic sweet and simple. Babajaan you made my day with this beautiful heart tickling poem. Just loved the love so beautifully portrayed in this poem.10

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