I'm a creature
Short of great beauty
Without great riches
Short of excellent
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It seems like you've taken my thoughts and written them down! ! ! Such a fantastic poem! ! ! ! ! Truly honest, and you've bared your soul. How brave you are! Great job!
wow. i love that. word for word the whole poem is true in so many ways. just love me for who i am, just says it all.
seeking unconditional love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it best of luck given 10
Excelent Eyan. Very sentimental, i could feel the heart!
love me for who iam, its nice to be wat ur and its nicer if someone love u for who ur, take me all as iam(human) will done dear
Well written, echoing the sentiments of many. Strange how goodness is seen then not long, people want to manipulate and change who you are, when that happens they dont like what you have become and you dont know you anymore moral of the story - be who you are and be happy
lovely write and some could take a lesson from it. I like your comparisons in this poem. Britney
everybody should be loved what they are...great poem
Love me for who I am is a really beautiful poem... I like your choice of words and the soft flow of the verses..10
great poem it has a nice flow... and good pick of words to it, keep up the good work
I like the way you express and explain yourself, a well earned 10! ! Chris x
nice poem, well expressed. thanks for sharing sharing with me. If you have time then please read my new poem ' Lost of life'
a nice intriguing poem... the inner side must we offer thats they way we measure how beautiful we are.. and we cherish it for their golden heart. nice write...
its a great poem and people should like for who you are on the inside not what you look like on the outside
it is the inside beauty that counts most..and loving a person for who is and not for what he is. It is a sad thing to note that others accept a person because of what he can give m and how many treasures he have. This is a write that flows well from your heart.Love this. Hugs, Meggie
A nice, rounded expression of your plea. Well done Eyan Mark
bravo! ! ! ! it is beautiful! !