Monday, April 13, 2009

...Love Me For Who I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm a creature
Short of great beauty
Without great riches
Short of excellent
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Eyan Desir
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Janell Cressman 09 May 2009

bravo! ! ! ! it is beautiful! !

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It seems like you've taken my thoughts and written them down! ! ! Such a fantastic poem! ! ! ! ! Truly honest, and you've bared your soul. How brave you are! Great job!

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Mona Martinez 02 May 2009

wow. i love that. word for word the whole poem is true in so many ways. just love me for who i am, just says it all.

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seeking unconditional love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it best of luck given 10

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Excelent Eyan. Very sentimental, i could feel the heart!

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Mohammed Albalushi 25 April 2009

love me for who iam, its nice to be wat ur and its nicer if someone love u for who ur, take me all as iam(human) will done dear

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 April 2009

Well written, echoing the sentiments of many. Strange how goodness is seen then not long, people want to manipulate and change who you are, when that happens they dont like what you have become and you dont know you anymore moral of the story - be who you are and be happy

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Britney Hogue 21 April 2009

lovely write and some could take a lesson from it. I like your comparisons in this poem. Britney

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everybody should be loved what they are...great poem

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Sandra Martyres 17 April 2009

Love me for who I am is a really beautiful poem... I like your choice of words and the soft flow of the verses..10

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Nic Leisure 16 April 2009

great poem it has a nice flow... and good pick of words to it, keep up the good work

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Christina Smith 16 April 2009

I like the way you express and explain yourself, a well earned 10! ! Chris x

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 April 2009

nice poem, well expressed. thanks for sharing sharing with me. If you have time then please read my new poem ' Lost of life'

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Raj Arumugam 14 April 2009

wonderful lines and good thoughts

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Ency Bearis 14 April 2009

a nice intriguing poem... the inner side must we offer thats they way we measure how beautiful we are.. and we cherish it for their golden heart. nice write...

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passion davis 14 April 2009

its a great poem and people should like for who you are on the inside not what you look like on the outside

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Meggie Gultiano 14 April 2009

it is the inside beauty that counts most..and loving a person for who is and not for what he is. It is a sad thing to note that others accept a person because of what he can give m and how many treasures he have. This is a write that flows well from your heart.Love this. Hugs, Meggie

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Mark R Slaughter 14 April 2009

A nice, rounded expression of your plea. Well done Eyan Mark

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Akram Awadat 14 April 2009

nice poem, well done thanks ofr sharing

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anurag duggal 14 April 2009

its a lovely poem indeeed

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