Love Materialized Comments

An excellent imaginative write. A great story with a meaningful message. Compelling imagery.10

Love is not a 'thing'. Indeed it is not material at all. Yet it affects in wondrous ways.

I have read the tale The Emperror and The Nightingale, a nice extract of the tale with your poetic approach.

we are the natural being The natures have great healing power if we want to live healthy we need to be closed to nature fictitious everything gives us ephemeral happiness great job

sweetest songs of nature and yes we live, we live in nature every feather of nature for us, for our life every breath of nature for our healthy life and we materialize it to live more comfortably ....... nice writings..10++

An imaginative write with great imagery. Enjoyable.

Idiot red is polite but still an idiot.To come to any poetry site with such a non de plume is intentionally downgrading every poem by his /her comments. No respect is shown. To think otherwise you, too, are an idiot!

Akhtar, such a well penned poem...10+++++

A beautiful poem. Birds, other animals, and everything that belongs in the nature should stay there. Humans should not put other magnificent creatures in cages, but we should just appreciate their beauty in their natural habitat... Thank you for sharing Mr Jawad - :)

It's a very lovely poem about the nature of love. Art and love should be freedom song and should not be caged.