Friday, March 30, 2007

Love Making Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Fingers mesmerizing cool and soft against skin
Tongues softly seeking whipping tasting lingering
Arms clutching holding wrapping enfolding yearning
Love making Love
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Leila Kay
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Andrew Blakemore 22 October 2019

Nice imagery created here Leila

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Nkosilathi Zinyane 05 August 2019

love making love beyond the control and conception of the human... love makes love... great poetry great words.

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marvelous poem, giving me the mood of the poet thank you for shearing.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2018

Superb Passionate poem on love making.10+

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John Dent 28 September 2018

the voice reading the poem does not do the poem justice. please more sensuality.and PASSION

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Ashok Kumar 21 July 2008

Nice. It looks like imagination has given way experience.

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2007

Love making love....a romantic romance creating lovingly love a reality so real! Great write, loved it. Top mark

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Duncan Wyllie 03 May 2007

Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x

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Duncan Wyllie 03 May 2007

Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 April 2007

Very passionate indeed Leila, what a picture you paint too... andy x

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Nyrical Poet 19 April 2007

Leila, this is such a passionate and moving piece of work! ! I will have to agree with you, I totally love making love! ! ! This is a definite 10 in my book! !

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Tranquil Ocean 13 April 2007

Written with a lot of sensuality and elegance Love...TO

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 March 2007

wow.. love making love... that`s so true, , and no one can feel this lovely and warm feelings only whom are in love.. you are in love leila.. i swear i can feel this within your great words, which sure came out through your soul and heart.. great write.. so stunning and warm.. yours hazem

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