Fingers mesmerizing cool and soft against skin
Tongues softly seeking whipping tasting lingering
Arms clutching holding wrapping enfolding yearning
Love making Love
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love making love beyond the control and conception of the human... love makes love... great poetry great words.
marvelous poem, giving me the mood of the poet thank you for shearing.
the voice reading the poem does not do the poem justice. please more sensuality.and PASSION
Love making love....a romantic romance creating lovingly love a reality so real! Great write, loved it. Top mark
Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x
Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x
Very passionate indeed Leila, what a picture you paint too... andy x
Leila, this is such a passionate and moving piece of work! ! I will have to agree with you, I totally love making love! ! ! This is a definite 10 in my book! !
wow.. love making love... that`s so true, , and no one can feel this lovely and warm feelings only whom are in love.. you are in love leila.. i swear i can feel this within your great words, which sure came out through your soul and heart.. great write.. so stunning and warm.. yours hazem
Nice imagery created here Leila