Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Love-Making Comments

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- Love-making-
Open thy heart layer after layer,
With full throated easy breathe into me,
Uncover thy floral frame,
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Prabir Gayen
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Srijan Mondal 04 June 2020

Suck all my dreams with thy look, Dig into my chest to drive all the pain, Upon thy swelling breast let me lie,

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Srijan Mondal 04 June 2020

The ignited love will close the door and we are one, Body melts into body to upright,

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Srijan Mondal 04 June 2020

Thy urge to be one will bring elements close, Mud with mud will mix and flame will flare,

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Srijan Mondal 04 June 2020

Open thy heart layer after layer, With full throated easy breathe into me, Uncover thy floral frame,

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Meethi Mondal 15 January 2019

Good poem on the theme of love.....

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Meethi Mondal 07 January 2019

Sweet coitus will make us forget our limited selves, Heaven will dawn in a room of love-laden lotus.......very fine expression

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