Wednesday, February 2, 2022

Love Makes The World Go Round Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your my light at the end of the tunnel,
Your my strength when I'm feeling down
Your my happiness gained in an instant,
Your laughter makes my world go round,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Grammar Police 04 February 2022

Lines one, two, three and six should be YOU'RE. Line four is correct with YOUR.

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2022

Love sheds light on day and night, makes the darkest of the nights bright…. Nice poem

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 February 2022

A lovely poem that speaks of a close bond and love for the grandchild. Beautiful poem.....10

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David Wood 02 February 2022

I echo LeeAnn's comments about my departed yellow Labrador Clara. She nearly made 15.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 February 2022

this is what my dog, Cooper makes me feel. I don't have anyone, except him Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 02 February 2022

Thank You LeeAnn x I don't get to see my Granchildren as often as I'd like as they live away. x I do miss my Scottie dog. There's nothing like the love of a pet xx

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2022

Grandchildren are the crown of grandparents.. They make their world complete. A lovely and heartfelt poem.

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Jayne Davies 02 February 2022

Thank you! xx

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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