Wednesday, August 22, 2007

Love, Lust Longing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love you with a deep desire
Lust for you with my whole being
Long for you to hold me close
Longing and lust my lover.
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Alison Smith
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beam_of_passion 08 September 2019

I fell so much in love with this poem, I created an illustration: https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_passion 08 September 2019

Check it out here https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_hope 08 September 2019

https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_hope 08 September 2019

I was really in love with it I decided to create an illustration.https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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Steven S 28 August 2009

I love the allusion brought to the poem by the word tremble...

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David Harris 22 August 2007

Alison, you've lit fire with this one to warm me on this chilly August morn. Another Gr-r-r-reat write my friend. Nice to see you penning regularly again. Top marks and thanks for sharing my friend. David

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Poison 9901 22 August 2007

This one definitaly has a sizzle about it. It can be taken many ways. Very nice read. Thanks 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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x... x... 22 August 2007

A passionate write full of longing and truth and written so eloquently and still hot, hot, hot. love it Alison.~~marci. :) ~~

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Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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