Monday, October 13, 2014

Love, Love, Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love, love, love, love, love, love
They wrote on the sea's shore.
Innumerable were the numbers
I couldn't read them anymore.
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Neela Nath Das
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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2014

But, I arrived at love's lagoon. Peace and love that remains for ever, we have no alternate but to come at a lagoon. a nice write.....10

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem Neela.... The poem concluded with interesting lines.... They tried again and again, But, I arrived at love's lagoon..............Loved it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 October 2014

Love's lagoon...seclusion in love.. nice poem gives much meaning..Thank u Neela

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