Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Love Love - Life Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

When love resides in heart
The head makes body to dance
Life enjoys moments
Tic tac tic toe tic tac
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 May 2023

I agree with Austin Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 21 May 2023

Such a delightful piece.......thank u....my friend.....

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Deepak S S 22 April 2022

Wonderful song.

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Varsha M 10 June 2021

Yes sir love is that essential thing which just can't go missing. That makes life worth living. Good one.

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

The beauty of this life Dances in tiny things Wearing the shawl of happiness Tic tac tic toe tic tac. Cute poem.

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Ricky Manhatten 07 January 2021

Tic tac is a beat of life

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Shreya Hacks 04 October 2020

Wow so well thought The beauty of this life Dances in tiny things Wearing the shawl of happiness Tic tac tic toe tic tac

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Suzon Albert 02 August 2020

Simple and soothing poem.

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Sebastian G 24 July 2020

With musical muses love and life entwined together in this amusing poem. Music to my ears.

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Michael Jack 12 July 2020

A song of life and love... The beauty of this life Dances in tiny things Wearing the shawl of happiness Tic tac tic toe tic tac

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Rakesh Malhotra 25 March 2019

Excellent poem, melodious.

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Tiffany Faros 27 February 2019

Melodious poem. Nicely expressed.

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2020

Thanks much..Rakesh

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Austin DeSouza 25 February 2019

Wonderful poem on love

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M Asim Nehal 06 March 2019

Thx Much Austin. D s

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Damim H 14 February 2019

Tic tac toe, you gave a flow What love has to do Is life's tale O

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M Asim Nehal 06 March 2019

Thx Damim H.....

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Ricky Manhatten 31 January 2019

Wonderful poem, , , , , , Love and Life both are part and parcel.

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M Asim Nehal 06 March 2019

Thx much Ricky M. .

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2019

Wonderful poem When love resides in heart The head makes body to dance Life enjoys moments Tic tac tic toe tic tac

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M Asim Nehal 06 March 2019

Thx Much Z Oftonton

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Gordon Walter 13 January 2019

Song is fantastic with repetition of lines/10

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thx Much Gordon Walter..

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Austin DeSouza 08 January 2019

Lovely song in poetic form.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thx Much A DeSouza

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T Rajan Evol 29 December 2018

Wonderful poem, Asim.Excellent use of tic tac

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2019

Thank u so much......

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Deepak S S 26 December 2018

Short and beautiful poem, they are inseparable.

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2018

Thx much Deepak.......

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