Love Lost. Comments

Wore a mystic smile, dazzled people for miles well written lyric poem, nice portrait 10

Melancholy Beauty…Sad poem still glittering with imageries… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

You have written this poem beautifully with so much compassion siddharth. I love the metaphor of dancing as it painted pictures in my mind. It is not a happy ever after poem, but life continues and one day it might be. Thank you for sharing. 10 love Karin

'four monsoons passed without her dancing in the rain'. A very poignant line. When the music has ended, hope has no place left to go. Excellent write. Kind wishes, Sandra

Wonderful description...nd good way of puting it up as a poem..10

Hopefully her story will be happy ever after. A sweet tale, Siddharth. Sweet but sad. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

wonderful narration but i hope Monica Bhabi was the final lovely story, nicely narrated in poetry -10 anjali

a fine poetic story told....nice poetic dedication!