Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Love Lost In Lifes Gain Comments

Rating: 4.5

Has my heart fell to a distant land?
A treasure buried deep within the sand
The reading of a compass shows no sign
For what’s forgotten is lost in time
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Peter A. Crowther 09 May 2006

Some nice lines here and nice rhymes. I like 'For what's forgotten is lost in time'.

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