Thursday, July 16, 2015

Love Lost Comments

Rating: 3.8

I cry I lied
I try im tired

Im turned to a beast
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thobile provin mabena
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Chinedu Dike 20 July 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It is however, whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Terrance Mawanga 18 July 2015

This a great poem. It conveys deep emotions. Keep up the good work.

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Mo Masedi 17 July 2015

It is a good poem, I loved it, how you rhyme your words.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 17 July 2015

Full of passion within the lines. Lovely poem

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Allotey Abossey 17 July 2015

I love your style... It's a beautiful poem as love but love has to be free. Good work friend. God bless you

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

A well written but sad poem, Thobile Thanks for sharing Peace

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