Illusion of progress
the passage of time
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Barb, this torturous vice, a perfect way of putting it! ! ! It's amazing how we are compelled to this vice. Even crave it! ! ! Great poem, thanks
This poem of yours express the tormenting feelings of your love in so real and vivid a style. I love this poem.
It's almost as if we invite the inevitable pain, but it does give us something to write about! Worth more than a ten!