Friday, February 3, 2006

Love Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaves drop when hearts fail
And curling to brown on bare ground
They trail.
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Tan Pratonix
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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

Beautifully expressed sad emotion of love lost. I just so enjoy your poetry.

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Gina Onyemaechi 03 February 2006

Powerful metaphor, and so (inevitably) saddening. Tan, I don't think I can get enough of you! ! Warm regards, Gina.

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