Thursday, March 22, 2007

Love Long Gone.. Comments

Rating: 4.4

One step at a time
Carefully examining each path
As I walk the cavern of memories
Feeling the chill that comes deep from within
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Patricia Gale
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Jim Foulk 28 April 2007

a great piece of art. i give it a ten. you do know how to write great poetry from the heart.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 23 March 2007

Love your descriptive verses, very, very nice

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Atmospheric and haunting. Suggests regret tinged with hope... t x

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Jerry Hughes 22 March 2007

...delightfully descriptive word picture

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Séamus Fox 22 March 2007

What's this prose? ? My Patricia your proving versatile once again! !

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Sean North 22 March 2007

thats why theres hours of love in those beautifull stalagmites and stalagtites though, Patricia, nice journey :)

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Declan McHenry 22 March 2007

A haunting piece Patricia. Very atmospheric indeed.

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