Tuesday, July 14, 2020

Love Lives Long But Lust Dies Soon! Comments

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Twin pyramids stand as twin hills on the vast desert;
Desert sand sans green vegetation anywhere is blanket;
Blanket blank with any writing on it delivers nothing;
Nothing is seen until oasis comes to quench the thirst!
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2020

Downward dip of mind and heart of many seek joy in valley; Valley having great pleasure giving flower is nice beauty; Beauty as serpentine one only can make all weak and die! Dying so they have created history and lesson to the world! Beauty as a serpentine. very fine expressions. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 July 2020

" World going on the right path reaps rich harvest and joy; Joy won't be lasting, if it's swayed by and not love! " Love has greater power to motivate people and we lead and love peaceful life whenever there is love. This poem is excellently penned.

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