Lighten me everywhere from your soft clutch
Brighten my loving heart on your flower
Absent I'm when you stop the pearl smiling
Drunken this breath smelling your temple fair
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My life in the dark! ! Waiting for true love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
your soft clutch....? ? ? you may like to change the last word to something more exciting mb
Brighten my loving heart on'' your'' flower LOVELY THIS IS all what ALL males desire glad you are now becoming a Romantic FIRE pp me's influence may be ENTIRE BE A BURNING INFERNO SHE conveys her inner flower's desire lol mb of bd..great imagery and your poem is indicative metaphorically
Beautiful work...specially the rhyming pattern- -10++