Tuesday, June 23, 2020

Love Link Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lighten me everywhere from your soft clutch
Brighten my loving heart on your flower
Absent I'm when you stop the pearl smiling
Drunken this breath smelling your temple fair
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Indira Renganathan 06 July 2020

Beautiful work...specially the rhyming pattern- -10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 June 2020

My life in the dark! ! Waiting for true love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2020

your soft clutch....? ? ? you may like to change the last word to something more exciting mb

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 June 2020

Brighten my loving heart on'' your'' flower LOVELY THIS IS all what ALL males desire glad you are now becoming a Romantic FIRE pp me's influence may be ENTIRE BE A BURNING INFERNO SHE conveys her inner flower's desire lol mb of bd..great imagery and your poem is indicative metaphorically

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 June 2020

An awesomely authored amazing poem...10++

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Abdul Qayyum Mulla 23 June 2020

Best linked of love so a fabulous poem

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