Hard years have fallen and my love commands,
Lady of loquacious speech, what blemish
can mar its passage? Time withers but love
remains perfect beneath its temporal glance;
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This is a lovely expression for the lady renowned. Perfectly placed words of change and transformation that is very beautiful. Your closing lines are beautiful.
being more than what I am or can ever be! ....thus is a beautiful essence expressed.
Very lovely and romantic.