Saturday, July 4, 2009

** Love Letters On The Sands Of Time **-In Top 500 Comments

Rating: 4.3

From the blood of my heart
The words that I write
Each word that haemorrhaged
The chiseled groove of my heart did tell
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ANJALI SINHA
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Dr Shrikant 24 August 2018

This is fantastic poem I like and dedicated to my sweet jadu

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

Honest revelation of your depth of feelings. Liked the entities you choose for comparision. Superb Anjali. A sweet 10. Ranjit.

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Jeremy Peyton 23 September 2009

this is a fantastic poem! .........thank you for sharing.........10

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Each word that conjugated Spelt with the fountains from my eyes Rachel Ann Butler

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Anand Madhukar 10 September 2009

A beautiful piece, outstanding...

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Himadari Jayasinghe 12 August 2009

Anjali, It's simply stunning.congrats! Im too busy to write a lengthy comment at the moment.But as soon as time permits me I'll do so.

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Ben Gieske 04 August 2009

Once, again, you use images very effectively to convey a meaningful picture. I like these: chiseled groove of my heart ink of my sighs fountains from my eyes petaled paper of love The time will tell-it will tell is very effective.

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Lillian Thomas 31 July 2009

You have flashes of brilliance in your imagery and your word choices. This is a very wonderful poem. The repetitions build a drum beat of the passage of time, reinforcing your meaning. Thank you for sharing.

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Sonya Florentino 29 July 2009

i love how this sounds like a folk ballad, the repetition makes it so musical!

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Anjali, first time I read your poem and I am mesmerized.It is fantastic.Deep-rooted emotion adorned with beatiful words.Hundred percent marks. Before my reading I find that it was already within top 500 poems.CONGRATS.

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Karanvir Kataria 24 July 2009

vey well written.. 10+ bbut not let the lost memories in sand of time.. remember thast moments and smile better to forget or to remember n cry

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Dave Tanwar 18 July 2009

stunningly beautiful poem. like it

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I...................like it!

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Harsh Bothra 18 July 2009

lovely... amazing, so beautifully done

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Tobias Caldicott 18 July 2009

Love it, familiar in a way.

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AM stuck with the ULTIMATE SILENCE........ the musings here left me WORD & SPEACH-LESS!

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Siglinde Good 16 July 2009

Very passionate. A rapture of love to sail one away...

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Anjali Sinha 15 July 2009

sweet words from Kumar From: Kumar Kumar (Bangalore India; Male; 28) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 7/15/2009 10: 25: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hey Kumar Haven't read the first poem...But went through the second and it was a pleasant read i must admit...what caught my attention was the title...'Love Letters on the Sands of Time'... Ever so beautifully thought....Keep writing.. Take care and keep smiling always, Kumar

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Anjali Sinha 15 July 2009

sweet words from Dianna From: Dianna Nally (Ludlow United States; Female; 55) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 7/15/2009 10: 56: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Love letters in the sand Beatifully penned words of love. So well expressed. A definate 10

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anurag duggal 15 July 2009

You will be immortal and so will be your letters..amen :)

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