From the blood of my heart
The words that I write
Each word that haemorrhaged
The chiseled groove of my heart did tell
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Honest revelation of your depth of feelings. Liked the entities you choose for comparision. Superb Anjali. A sweet 10. Ranjit.
this is a fantastic poem! .........thank you for sharing.........10
Each word that conjugated Spelt with the fountains from my eyes Rachel Ann Butler
Anjali, It's simply stunning.congrats! Im too busy to write a lengthy comment at the moment.But as soon as time permits me I'll do so.
Once, again, you use images very effectively to convey a meaningful picture. I like these: chiseled groove of my heart ink of my sighs fountains from my eyes petaled paper of love The time will tell-it will tell is very effective.
You have flashes of brilliance in your imagery and your word choices. This is a very wonderful poem. The repetitions build a drum beat of the passage of time, reinforcing your meaning. Thank you for sharing.
i love how this sounds like a folk ballad, the repetition makes it so musical!
Anjali, first time I read your poem and I am mesmerized.It is fantastic.Deep-rooted emotion adorned with beatiful words.Hundred percent marks. Before my reading I find that it was already within top 500 poems.CONGRATS.
vey well written.. 10+ bbut not let the lost memories in sand of time.. remember thast moments and smile better to forget or to remember n cry
AM stuck with the ULTIMATE SILENCE........ the musings here left me WORD & SPEACH-LESS!
sweet words from Kumar From: Kumar Kumar (Bangalore India; Male; 28) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 7/15/2009 10: 25: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hey Kumar Haven't read the first poem...But went through the second and it was a pleasant read i must admit...what caught my attention was the title...'Love Letters on the Sands of Time'... Ever so beautifully thought....Keep writing.. Take care and keep smiling always, Kumar
sweet words from Dianna From: Dianna Nally (Ludlow United States; Female; 55) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 7/15/2009 10: 56: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Love letters in the sand Beatifully penned words of love. So well expressed. A definate 10
This is fantastic poem I like and dedicated to my sweet jadu