Saturday, April 12, 2008

Love Letters And More Comments

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Since the day you first said hello,
I've fallen in love and I want you to know,
So I'm writing love letters and more,
Poetry for the woman that I adore.
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Harry J. Couchon Jr
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Anne Rhitak 12 April 2008

Good poem, but you might want to consider adding punctuation...the flow at points is unsteady, I think punctuation would remedy that.

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Harry J. Couchon Jr

Harry J. Couchon Jr

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