Love Letters Comments

By fire you rid of me, by fire I will depart The color of my flame, red as your bleeding heart With the smoke leaving me, your dreams have flown away And with tears in your eyes, to them we say goodbye....broken heart. a very fine poem indeed. thank u dear poet. tony

'Ashes are my remains' Rachel Ann Butler

i could imagine what does the third person wishes. well she has all right to get mad for the hope that faded to broken heart...hmmmm... they can't see your hard work... what they want is you. nobody wins this one except the night. my eyebrows kiss each other, my lips parted and my pen drip. very beautiful poem. thanks.md

A nice piece with wonderful metaphors,10 for it. Amazing composition, lovely.

an enticing letters..great verses... A 10 4 this... Ency Bearis

A lovely poem, love it.10++