Love Letter One Comments

An eloquent pen and HEART...

i see this as a journey of one, searching for the lost love, and the pain to achieve it. good write a ten

A lovely romantic love poem/letter. You heart pours out words of love. Very enjoyable to read. I'm partial to love poem...this is a 10.

The poem is reflective of a romantic heart. Good.

romantic... nice one... luwi

Captures much romance

touching, lovely and wonderful job 10++ keep doing wht u do best

Touching, exciting and beautiful.10.

i agree with obed but i think it is very good....contains many wonderful words and expressions which covered what obed have said......i think it's not confusing...i didn't feel overwhelmed when i read it.....gread job my friend keep it up...10

You have poured your heart and soul into this love letter Ahmad and you have written it with so much information and passion. Poetry is so good to get the emotions out on the page and you have done this well. I do agree it could be put into stanzas as although it is familiar to you, our eyes find it difficult to take it all in and need to rest in between to give it the attention it so deserves. 10 for all the work you have put in with this poem. love Karin

this poem is awsome! i loved it, it is really touching

I agree with Obed Dela Cruz. Kindly make it in convenient stanzas for us to read comfortably. Please don't mistake us for pointing out like this.

it is fine but it is 46 or 47 lines straight. It is super good but will be super better when divided into stanzas or metric verses.

nice abstract poem, well written, thank you for sharing.............10+++

Bless both of you! Fate willing.

a nice piece of art, good

this is super nice..i like the way this poem is written..