Saturday, November 8, 2008

**** Love Letter Comments

Rating: 4.4

Darling oh Darling
Embraces this writing
Letter of better
Cannon of greater
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

waittt, , i hve a corrction on ths...its not for every generations..coz others r using sms to send ths kisses, , , ooowwww whatta social world..

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Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

a love letter for all generations? maybe, , , its for our generations.... but when we gage ths as poem, ths s excellent hon from u..am a late comer here so here i am, , , hehehhe came late... a very beautiful piece, , , my gosh, i dont want to put flowering wrds on ths, , u mght think i lied.. ths s EXCELLENT...SUPERB..HONORED..no one hits u hon, believe me..

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Albert Fernandez 07 January 2009

oh my my gosh i love it! it mives me butterflies! !

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

pleasant love letter for a loved one...hmmm....cute... 'What a nag when I sleep I dream of your strawberry smiles '....best lines...

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Adriana Veloso 05 December 2008

To be honest I think that you have best poems but this one is good too bye have a good night

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Minal Sharma 25 November 2008

I LIKED VERY MUCH....................

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Li Away 22 November 2008

nicely pinned this love letter

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Maria Sudibyo 21 November 2008

it will make my cheek blushed if i got this love letter. oh, do you eat 'love letter' too?

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Jeffrey Omarino 19 November 2008

so well written nice one: -)

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Muriel Emerson 17 November 2008

nice poem i like it a lot its a 10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 November 2008

very well done! keep writing!

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Dolan Doran 16 November 2008

a definate 10...i love the end, the 'Elope' verses....amazing. astounding metaphors. the whole poem quite literally touches the heart. love it!

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Sucheta Tiwari 15 November 2008

it gets extremely captivating 'the phantom..' onwards... a 10! !

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Hershe Moore 12 November 2008

beautifully translated...your words flow eloquently and soften the heart

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Kesav Easwaran 12 November 2008

your love poems are excelling one another, Sulaiman...good write...10

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Fading Heart 12 November 2008

Your words say dear things about your love this girl must be very lucky You wrote such a beatiful poem and still you were able to rhyme great work

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Saskia Harjono 12 November 2008

Splendid! What a great piece of poem! Anyway, what couldn't one do in the name of love! :)

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Mike Farris Jr. 11 November 2008

Great poem! Keep up the writing.

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Dawn Rodgers 11 November 2008

your girl is lucky and I hope that you two are able to be together. much respect dawn

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Sherif Monem 11 November 2008

Very romantic poem with fresh ideas.

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