Tuesday, July 28, 2020

Love Lessons From The Moon...... Comments

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When the moon dances on the water's edge
My wish turns to fishes and swims
The milky white water reflects my desire
To shine like the moon in the sky
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Moon shines in the sky with glee of beam of tenderness. The reflection falls on water and crystal clear and white water reflects stillness in waves. Telling a new story, moon has come within your eyes. In this Earth we expect many things. Sun and moon fulfill our desires giving light of hope. With reflection of calmness, patience and love, we have to learn many things. Love amazes time to time and moon's love is special...10

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Michael Jack 28 July 2020

Creativity at its best. You have nick to write some wonderful and creative poems. Thanks for sharing your poem.

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Shreya Hacks 28 July 2020

Very true there are several different things to know about and learn from the moon.

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Deepak S S 28 July 2020

Creative thinking. Never thought like this, you are fantastic imaginator

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2020

Night life! ! Darkness! ! ! ! ! With the romance of the moon; The love of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M. Asim Nehal

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