Thursday, July 3, 2008

Love Lastes Forever Comments

Rating: 4.0

Since you been gone it haven't been the same,
Now that you're gone I don't like anyone to call your name.

Your love haven't left it's right here in my heart,
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La'Kira Jackson
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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 July 2008

Fine composition! ......well done

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 July 2008

I recommend this because the rhyming was very good and as a result, it was easier to read. It still has a way to go but this writer has some talent displayed already. GW62

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