Love Lantern Comments

Terrific verse, Soul. You take me back to those old images of Cupid with a flaming arrow. Memories! Really well done!

Burned in this emotion In the warmest flames The heat that revives spring Iced heart melted to flow blood Awakening evergreen smiles In sensational burning.........ohhhhhh i am burned. this is a wonderful love poem dear poetess full of romantic emotions. fine. you are a great poetess.

Even for a thousand years Flame it may flames With fire of love.....A complete outburst of emotion.Nicely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing.It deserves full marks 10+++ Regards Binaya.

O my soul hold them tight Be now you are my arrows of light Hit a touch that turn bright The love lantern arrows My arrows of love light Warned to not stare my eyes Or to read my words As if it shot by these strings You will burn, forever burned In this fire Fire of Love.. . lovely theme. It is a gorgeous poem on love having stunning expression and beautiful collocation. Dear Soul, I read your poem over and over again and your poet's note too and came to know that you have inscribed this poem with full imagination and have justified the title of the poem as ' 'Love Lantern' or 'Fire Of Love'. Thanks for posting.

Fire of love! ! With the joy of the heart. Nice work.

Love it all the way in and out, brilliant write

O my soul hold them tight Be now you are my arrows of light Hit a touch that turn bright The love lantern arrows My arrows of love light These are wonderfully written lines and convey your meaning brilliantly.

Beautifully selected and placed words. Loved the feel of this piece tyvm karen

In this eternal flames Fire of Love..........................warm!

To be burned in the infectious flame of love is a thrilling feeling! Let the world be caught in the wild fire of all embracing love ! ! ! A very very inspirational write, Soul! !

Beautiful poem, Soul... cuting right to the heart of the blazing flame of the Fire... wonderful... Terry

this love is not a Lantern then.it s a wide flame and may burn all the worl through itself. O songbird, learn the Love from a butterfly which burnt but not a singing great written.hope your love reaches all over the world.but be carful not burn the world hahaha ~nb

A lovely concept Soul, may your arrows reach every heart.

Dramatic repetition of the phrase Fire of love helps to reinforce and, eventually, validate the poet's brilliantly cited applications. A clever, effective- even, lovely- artistic choice by one who rarely errs in such matters.