Love Land Comments

As you said there are to sides the inside and outside you i think saw them both...Thank you..(IT)

Life is not a rosy dream but a bed of thorns which we've to accept. A wonderful poem. U get 10++.......

Blue Eyes, being a great poet means you are extremely sensitive to things/people around you, yes? No doubt, more than the average bear, you are going to have strong emotional reactions to life, how it seems to unravel before your examining eyes, mind and heart. You'll be more tuned in, whether you want to be or not, yes? Never lose sight of that because that is the basis of your talent, in my not so humble opinion. Keep a strong upper lip and keep in mind that you are a true recorder of history in the making. You are not alone! Carol

I know life is not always what we thought but just be strong and determine when thwe met setbacks! Thanks for sharing!

this is a very well wrote poem

So far i lIke this one... keep the good job :) cheers.. P.S You are so in love i can feel it :) R.R

hey dont stand on quicksand stand on Rock of Gibraltar love life---youll be happy ++++++10 anju

quite tragic! but still i like it. nice write

I like it, but it makes me sad.

Ummmmmmmmmmm Life is not what it seems

again.. WOW! i love dis one!

your piece is nice and strong....written with honesty....its like hitting my heart and mind with a hammer....and feel the pain just like you do.

that was very good, and so very true...

This is so very true.....Keep up the good work Krista

I like how you rythm but yet you do such an awesome job! Very good. It shows the not so good side of our world. ~Sunshine ♥

Short yet deep. Nice.

It all comes down to contentment

Deep verse this one...thanks for sharing it...