Love Ladden Lust Comments

I liked this one too. You know most people here like the ending but I like the start. Look I love you but fear............................................ What? ? ? ? ? you might not bear..........................................Might not bear Love....! how? the burden of pleasure......hmmmmmmmmmmm Now clear you are going to give her every pleasure I will provide you for sure..................... Spectacular

rhapsodic like rap.... the rhythm is perfectly blended with the tone of the poem......speaks your craftsmanship.

nicely written.with wonderful ending.welldone.~nb

This is a really good write, I loved the way it flows and it shows your emotions

Great write, I really enjoyed it, with great rhythm and flow!

Well I think it was wonderful...Im still learning to be a poet myself...smiles...I have only been writing for 6 years now...so...yeah....its just become something that I live and breath for now...its like secound nature to me....mind cant stop thinking of poems...its like a creation of ideas and concepts just bursting fom my soul...smiles..sorry get so excited when talking about poetry....wonderful write...enjoy it so much...thank you for sharing.