Love Kills Comments

Keep up the good work i wanna hear some more ur a talented writer

you really need to write what comes from the heart, if this is it thats great write more, but you and i both know its not. i liked the poem, but it sunded a bit forced.

Well Anthony-or Brandon, You're (not your) just seventeen, but I wrote better poems than this when I was 12. That's because the nuns taught me grammar. As for the hip hop story, it's a cliché that's been seen hundreds of times. As for the verse, you're rhyming off the top of your head. There's no structure to the lines or the rhyme, only the static of forced rhythm. Don't tell me this is the best our 'z' generation can do. Surely Armageddon is upon us!

the attitude and style of this poem coincide well...you brought out your mind truely well...keep writing

Your writing and rhyme stlye seems to me to have a rap influence. Good work.

William Blake is not only famous poet, but a great writer of short poem in, my heart felt that your style would be another William, so beautiful, just feel what every time you make a poem....it’s in you my friend, the wisdom of time and the power of the moment....go on...God bless...a 10+++++

nicely written........ keep it up...........

Dam i like this poem you speak of love in a way that someone our age should not be able to.... Great write keep writing

I don't recommend this kind of love, dear poet...but this is quite an impressive write for someone your age. Emotion well expressed!

wow good job keep up the good work i love the way you add detail to it