‘love Killed Me’ Comments

Deeply thought out and nicely penned

very meaningfull poem. i love this para more 'The love is concealed The world is unreal Hurt is how I feel Dirt is now my meal The naivety of youth Searching for truth Loyalty is proof I’m talking to you! ' posted 10 surya

great poem keep up the good work

The design of the write here is quite interesting. It has a certain appeal because it has a nice reading flow. I'm not sure, but that may be the source of its charm. Otherwise. It is a quite ordinary poem. Full credit for construction of this poem. GW62

Wow I really enjoyed reading this poem. It sounds like a poem I would write. Great job Bilal Raja.

wow your a really awesome poet!

its wonderuful write

I m amazed bilal 2 c yer unique style hmmmmmmmm...lv it Wowwwwww... I m impress... love yer style dear.. i can see art in yer poem+10 4 yer poem nd A+++++ 4 yer style

A beautiful, soulful lament of lost love. Added to my favourites. :)

This poem reaches into the deepest part of my emotions and brings out my feeling.

wow, i am truly blown away, when i first saw this title, i was like this is going to be intresting, and yet it is, i mean the words rhyme and it; s beautiful! ! it's amazing, i have never seen any poem like this this is truly amazing! !

What an wonderful write! Thank you very much for sharing! I am adding it to my favorites!

Dirt is now my meal The naivety of youth Searching for truth Loyalty is proof I’m talking to you! dear bilal, you have the things to be a great poet. i love the last four lines the most because they have zest. but i dont understand the first line - dirt is my meal. may be i just dont like the word dirt. the last four lines are great material. keep on and read all the great poets and you will find yourself improving day by day. tks. john

Nice poem well written

i loved this poem! ! ! ! u r an excellent writer! ! ! plzz keep em coming! ! !

wow it is nice! ! ! ! ! ! !

o wow this poem is like the true about everything and anything. it is so nice

very different style.....I like it.

Wow! I love the words you use. I think there are many people who can relate to it.

WOW, i luv it..very passionate...10++