Saturday, March 31, 2007
Love Is What I Make It Comments
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love is what i make it
love is what i need
love comes and goes
for me loves just a pain
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7/21/2025 10:38:02 AM # 1.0.0
I really like the way you repeat sounds and words throughout the poem and then end with a word that sounds totally different to any of the others. The word 'critic' stands out - because of the way it sounds and the associative meanings it has - not a word associated normally with love poetry. It's harsh and ends the poem with a real 'punch'.