Love Is Vengeance Comments

I'm a romantic so Ilike romantic stories. Veeery interesting, i like the story it also reminded me of a movie I saw. It is more pros than poetry though. It think I will call this poem POETIC JUSTICE.

A little bit drag my emotion...like a punisher... putting fire in the head to ease the pain.....true yet! unforgettable to accept....oh! a mystery of life.....can do but Wish to say a beautiful goodbye to whom love resides....You'll great my friend... God bless...a 10/10

'He shuddered with fear, wide eyed and breathless, didn't utter a word....he didn't dare, she smiled at him, doe-eyed and fearless, said “fear me not as i only care”. His bones made no noise as the car sped, he look out the window only to see darkness, he knew she couldn't care less. Bewitched he asked “baby what would you gain? ”, said she “don't worry baby...this wouldn't pain”. And he didn't feel any.....as he dissolved into the thin air, along with his baby to be together again....lifeless again.' -Is my fav. Your an amazing writter. You have a great talent.

someone replaced her already, she was out of his life already, she continued her glare as the “other woman” noticed her, wondered why her husband was looked at with such intense anger...it has remained unanswerd for many years as it is the scene of the day and it happenswith few to under go agony of the life.....beautiful poem.....10 read mine...tajmahal.....i miss.... miss i miss u

Incredible! ! ! ! this poem was just incredible! ! ! ! Loved the story the rhyming! you totally made it work! I was hooked instanly! keep it up! ! ! 10+++ Sayz :)