Friday, September 1, 2006

Love Is To Blame Comments

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I’ll love you always till the end
A long passed feeling now held again
Heart still aching from love now old
But in your hands my heart you hold
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Evy Moore
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Joseph Daly 15 September 2006

This is a lovely piece Evy. It has a lovely flow to it and your rhyming is great.

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Abby Koning 12 September 2006

More inspiring words! I'm glad you asked me to read, so far it's been a pleasure. I'm just curious...have you ever tried writing free verse? I believe it's something every poet should try at least once. Although, this might be too soon, for I haven't read all your poems yet. On a side note, I just 'had my heart broken' yesturday and these words ring true. Sincerely, ~*Me*~

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Leo Lopes 11 September 2006

Nice work again... i'm with you love is to blame 'Heart still aching from love now old But in your hands my heart you hold' ...I know you feel it Evy cause i feel it too

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